Ashli
The book seems very interesting and something out of the usual. The book gives off a vibe that may drag your attention away and keep it! The book may show and relate to things that people face in daily lives. It is apparent that there is excitement and much drama. Can you relate to your book in any ways?you explain certain characteristics between the two sister. But soon you will need to get more specific which i bet it ont be any problem at all. Anyways, it seems very interesting.
Fermin
the book seems interesting and familiar to you since you read some of the other books. since it is a sequel and has other books that relate to it explain more about that.The book gives off a vibe that may drag your attention in comparison to the other books similar to it.  The book may show and relate to things that people face in daily lives. It is apparent that there is excitement and things that interest you.you should expand more on your commentary. write more about what you get out of the book. i feel as if you are just explaining facts rather than more of how the information affects you. Make it personal. 

Elizabeth
the book seems so different but interesting. wizards! ...now that is something that catches peoples attention. i really like how you get into explaining one of the characters thoroughly. not only do you explain who the person is in the story, but you go further in. you basically indirectly explain problems that the character faces about being a women thats a wizard, though i am a bit confused. since she has powers and is a woman isn't she automatically a witch? i also believe that the review would become a stronger if you were to elaborate on the second question a bit more.