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I am reading Charlie st. Cloud, by Ben Sherwood. The book tells the story of a young man facing dilemmas in life more specifically centralizing in family and love. There are many interesting characters in my book. One of the main characters pops out the most. Her name is Tess. Tess is the young women in the story that thrills the readers and takes many unexpected turns.

When Tess was introduced, her character seems to be a cold-hearted person with one specific purpose in life. Tess held a purpose she was determined to accomplish, without allowing any interference.

For example, Tess as a young girl grew up boating without her father. Tess' father and her held that hobby and strong connection. When in the water Tess felt alive and truly herself. She felt as of she was bonding with nature. But as time passed her true passion with her father would break. Her father passed away and her alone.

Whenever Tess felt the out lash onto the water, she had no one. The waters she decides to boat in are dangerous. So why does Tess want to keep on going with her hobby? Tess faced a near death experience. " then the image from last night grabbed hold of her mind: querencia flipping over, the world investing. "JESUS" she said out loud sitting up. She rubbed a bruise on her forearm. She had definitely learned her lesson. "page (81)Instead of taking that experience to stop boating, she used it to change her personality. Tess became responsible and thought about others.

As soon as Tess arrived on land, she was a changed person. One of the first things that she did was go to visit her father at the cemetery. Tess had regularly visited her farther in the past, but it suddenly stopped. Tess was not exactly sure what led her to end the frequent visits. As Tess spent moments in the cemetery, she recognized a familiar face. That familiar face was of Charlie st. Cloud. Tess did not hesitate one bit to approach and conversing, with Charlie once again. She had not seen him since a few years. Tess’s personality made a complete turn; from her own world to be being more open.